the package

this morning there was a man
stnding in front of the door
he got a package
a box, a carton one

inside the box
a green plastic bag
four things inside

one is unwanted, no more
one would burn the tongue
another one would never arrive
and the other reminded him of a sad old love

the sender
is someone who loved him very much

4 komentar:

Anonim mengatakan...

no, it doesn't remind the guy of old love, but it has a story about old love.

n that package change the story, now.

burn? why do u give a guy, a present that would hurt him? that's like giving sex for b'day, but herpies comes with it :P

he doesn't want the gift anymore? r u sure? i think he likes d gift.

it's from a person that really loves him. what do you think?

the mouse mengatakan...

i think it was a relief knowing that he likes the gift

Anonim mengatakan...

i think the guy talks too much -.-

the mouse mengatakan...

ehehe.. thats why she loves him?